Inner Evil-
The student made opening was effective as it included the right camera angles, editing, sound and mise-en-scene, that builds tension. The scene is a girl, waking up and getting ready for the day, then she seems to be walking somewhere, but we are unaware where she is going. A few examples of a good use of camera work that I noticed was; right at the beginning there is a close-up of the girl lying on the ground with a gun shot in her head. This builds tension because we are unaware of what happened to the girl, and why she is lying on the floor. There is also a long shot of the girl walking down the street and someone is following her, we are unaware of who this person is, they are wearing all black, which we would associate with someone who is a criminal, suggesting that the girl is in danger of being hurt. Finally there is a shot that fades into focus of the face of the person who is following her, and it turns out that the 2 people are the same person, hence the title 'Inner Evil'.
When looking at the editing there is a technique used to make the audience feel like their eyes are playing tricks on them, the shots overlay each other, this is a good technique that the students used because it made the audience wonder what was actually going on, and whether or not they could trust what they've been told. As well as this, there is a use of dream sequences that shows the girls 'inner evil' making us wonder which one of these characters is the real one.
There is a piano playing fast tempo music that get louder, it adds tension to the scene and without it, I don't think the scene would have the same effect that it does. It was a good choice by the students. It was set in pretty normal places, her house, along the street and in park, these places aren't what we would consider you're average thriller film settings which is why I think that it is effective as it keeps the audience on the edge of their seats. There are little props, which is good because if there was too much going on it would take away from the main story line, however the one that is used is a key. the key causes her to have a thought of how she could use the key as a weapon, showing her inner evil.
The main character is wearing normal, every day clothes as it is set during the day with high key lighting, showing the normality of the world she lives in, contrasting her abnormal thoughts and feelings.Overall I think the scene is good as it involves a lot of the conventions that a thriller opening should, suspenseful moments, good use of camerawork ect... it also leaves you on the edge of your seat, as you wonder where the girl is going on her walk, or what has cause her 'inner evil'. However to improve, I would've given a little more away in the opening with the use of dialogue or storytelling. I would've done this to insure that the audience stay interested in the film.
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Close-up |
When looking at the editing there is a technique used to make the audience feel like their eyes are playing tricks on them, the shots overlay each other, this is a good technique that the students used because it made the audience wonder what was actually going on, and whether or not they could trust what they've been told. As well as this, there is a use of dream sequences that shows the girls 'inner evil' making us wonder which one of these characters is the real one.
There is a piano playing fast tempo music that get louder, it adds tension to the scene and without it, I don't think the scene would have the same effect that it does. It was a good choice by the students. It was set in pretty normal places, her house, along the street and in park, these places aren't what we would consider you're average thriller film settings which is why I think that it is effective as it keeps the audience on the edge of their seats. There are little props, which is good because if there was too much going on it would take away from the main story line, however the one that is used is a key. the key causes her to have a thought of how she could use the key as a weapon, showing her inner evil.
The main character is wearing normal, every day clothes as it is set during the day with high key lighting, showing the normality of the world she lives in, contrasting her abnormal thoughts and feelings.Overall I think the scene is good as it involves a lot of the conventions that a thriller opening should, suspenseful moments, good use of camerawork ect... it also leaves you on the edge of your seat, as you wonder where the girl is going on her walk, or what has cause her 'inner evil'. However to improve, I would've given a little more away in the opening with the use of dialogue or storytelling. I would've done this to insure that the audience stay interested in the film.
Redemption-
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This is the over the shoulder shot |
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This is the establishing shot. |
In regards to the sound, the music is calming in the beginning, again giving you this idea of an equilibrium. However it gets louder and more prominent as the scene goes on, adding and building the tension as the fight scene breaks out. The protagonist Jason, has little dialogue throughout the scene, maybe only one line. This adds suspense as we don't really know whats going on.
The protagonist, Jason, is wearing all black, this could indicate he is trying to hide or not be seen. The antagonist is wearing a full suit, this could represent his high paid job, especially if it is set in a city. The only props that are used are, guns- a convention of thriller film and the briefcase, which is the object for the whole opening. The lighting was high ket as it is set mainly outside, which goes against the convention of a thriller film because usually it has darker lighting.
Overall I think the scene was well produced and it looked very professional, to improve I think that their could've been more dialogue, maybe giving the audience a little information about what was going on, it could make them more interested.
Insignia-
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This is the extreme-long shot |
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This is the extreme close-up |
The editing shows fast cuts as he runs around the house looking for someone, and trying to remember what happened to him. This was used to show the audience the panic he feels as he wants to remember. There is a match on action, showing the normality of the setting hes in. Finally right at the end, it fades to black, this leaves you on the edge of your seat wanting more.
The mise-en-scene shows that this is a thriller film as, he is wearing all black and it is set in a remote location at first, slowly followed by his house that is empty. This all doesn't make sense to the audience or the main character- bring the feeling of suspense to the scene. The lighting is high key as is set in the early morning and the only props he uses are his skateboard, that he promptly discards and the paper research, as he scrambles to get his memory back, but ultimately in the opening fails. Overall, I think that this opening was the best one that I looked at, showing all of the key ideas your meant to include clearly, it makes you wish there was more to it in order to find out what happens to him and what had already happened.