Our Pitch Idea

This is our opening pitch.




This is the Prezi presentation we put together in order to give our presentation. It outlines our key ideas and plot, a few locations we have decided we may want to use, the props, costumes and make-up we have considered. As well as this there is a little information on our 3 main characters. Despite the presentation, we are free to change and alter our final idea as we please.

We received some feedback from the other people in our class. They said things like; they think the plot is nicely structured, and well thought-out. As well as this they liked our key moment of suspense, along with the choice of camera angles, the close- up of the hand in particular and they thought that our idea for music and sound effects was good. Finally they thought the idea of us going against the stereotype of women being the more dominant sex was good as it contradicts many of the current films that show them as being submissive in comparison to the males. 

However our constructive criticism brought up some ideas, that maybe we hadn't thought of- like how the main idea has a lot to fit in, within the 2 minute cap and it comes across as a little confusing. I understand this, but it was only some initial ideas we had, obviously we will not be able to fit everything in, we will condense it down so it isn't as confusing for the audience as well as that there will be a use of short takes and the dialogue will be minimal. Another point was that it seems to be cliche (man cheating on woman idea) and we thought we'd include some twists that make it less cliche, like the dominant women idea. Some people had some concerns about our locations. The office, we can make as you won't see much of it, only the computer- most of it is implied with the sounds. Another location was an old factory but this was only an example of where we could film, its more likely that we'll use an attic or cellar in one of our homes, or Brooke may have a stable that we can use. A final piece was the fact our woman was dominant and why we were doing that and I think we chose it to show woman in the 21st century and how they shouldn't still be seen as the submissive in a relationship, as they are more equal now than ever before.